缘情设景:爱的奉献-Th Dvotion of Lov 爱的奉献

【内容提示】

在你的心中有一位非常好的老师。他（或她）全身心投入工作，从不考虑自己：课堂上对你们要求很严格，而平时又好像是你们的朋友；教学、工作认真负责；节假日从不休息，而是帮同学补课；教你们弹琴、绘画、唱歌……。但他（或她）因患癌症而离开了人世。当你一听到或一想到歌曲《爱的奉献》和《我是一棵小草》时就会不由自主地想起这位老师。他（或她）永远活在你的心中。

【作文示范】

Th Dvotion of Lov

Dar frinds, you may hav hard th song----Th Dvotion of Lov①. It has bn vry popular sinc 1988, and is njoyd by mor and mor popl. Why? Bcaus it has bn sung for th popl. As long as vryon dvots a littl lov, th world will b vn mor bautiful.

Whnvr I har th song, I can't hlp thinking of my dar tachr,Mr. Wang. H gav his lif to th caus of ducation. H will b rmmbrd as an nginr of th soul forvr. As his studnt, I will nvr forgt thos days that w spnt togthr.

H was a kind and warm-hartd man. Th momnt I saw him, I flt as if h wr my fathr. In class, h was strict in our studis. But in th spar tim, h was our good frind. H oftn taught us how to play th violin, to sing, and to draw picturs. H card not only for our studis but also for our minds. Whnvr w had difficultis in our studis or in our daily lif, h would ncourag us to ovrcom thm. Whn w faild in our xams, h would hlp us, “Don't los hart, work hardr and you will succd.” On his holidays, h would giv up his rst to hlp thos who had difficulty in thir studis so that thy could catch up with th othr studnts. H was just lik a candl, burning himslf away to provid light for othr. H was such a good tachr that all of us lovd and rspctd him.

But a yar ago, word cam that Mr. Wang did of cancr. Haring this, I couldn't hlp crying. I rmmbr th song of Small Grass: No swtr than a flowr, no tallr than a tr…. Small grass is ordinary, but grand②. Mr. Wang is a blad③ of small grass. H gav his studnts all his lov. Mr. Wang will liv in our harts forvr.

（选自《英语画刊》1996年第12期）

【词语解释】

①Th Dvotion [di'v uM n] of Lov（歌名）《爱的奉献》

②grand [gr$nd] a．重大的；崇高的

③blad [blid] n．（草）叶片

【写法指要】

这是一篇文笔优美的抒情文章，展现了一名学生对老师深情的爱。文章开头是一小段关于歌曲《爱的奉献》意境的描写，作者由歌声想到与他们朝夕相处的王老师——他就是一位为教育事业奉献了“爱”的人。他爱同学、爱工作、爱生活，可惜因患癌症而去世。他把一生都献给了人民。由此，作者又想起了《小草》歌：虽然王老师像小草一样平凡，但他却像小草一样崇高（grand）。因此作者说，王老师就是人们常常比喻的像蜡烛一样燃烧了自已，照亮别人的教师的代表。全文情真景美，缘情设景，情由景发，景由情生，情景交融，相映成趣。 缘情设景:爱的奉献-Th Dvotion of Lov